warning · Section 9: Writing practices

Rule 9.1: Use a different sentence construction when a word-for-word replacement is not enough

When a non-approved word cannot simply be swapped for an approved word with the same part of speech and the same meaning, do not force a literal word-for-word replacement. Instead, restructure the whole sentence using approved words so it preserves the original meaning clearly and grammatically.

What a checker looks for

Usually a deviation, and context can excuse it.

  • Flag a sentence where a non-approved word's dictionary alternative has a different part of speech or would create a grammatically awkward or leftover structure if substituted in place (e.g. an adjective's approved verb replacement left inside an unchanged 'must be ...' construction).
  • Flag a sentence where a word-for-word substitution would produce a meaningless or nonsensical result (e.g. replacing a verb with its only listed dictionary alternative when that alternative has an unrelated sense in this context).
  • Flag a sentence where the chosen approved substitute changes the intended meaning of the original word (e.g. substituting 'immediately' for 'just' in a restrictive sense).
  • Flag a sentence containing a word that is not in the STE dictionary at all and that has not been reworded around an approved synonym or paraphrase.

What this rule does not cover

  • A straightforward word-for-word substitution is compliant, not a violation of this rule, when the replacement has the same part of speech and preserves the exact meaning — this rule applies only when that simple substitution is not sufficient.

How to fix it

Determine the precise intended meaning of the non-approved word in context, then rebuild the sentence with approved words and whatever grammatical structure conveys that exact meaning naturally — this may mean changing the verb, adding a phrase such as 'make sure that,' or splitting the sentence.

Constraints on the fix

  • Never choose a substitute word solely because it is approved if it does not preserve the original meaning.
  • Verify the reconstructed sentence is grammatically correct standard English, not just an approved-word patchwork of the original.

Examples

Not STE: The oil level on the sight gauge must be visible during the test.

STE: During the test, make sure that you can see the oil level on the sight gauge.

'visible' is not approved; using the approved verb 'see' requires restructuring 'must be' into 'make sure that you can'.

Not STE: Lift the seat so that it clears the track locks.

STE: Lift the seat until it is away from the track locks.

'clear' is not an approved verb, and its only dictionary alternative 'clean' would give the wrong meaning, so the sentence is restructured with 'until it is away from'.

Related rules

Where this fits in AI governance

A rule a checker can test is a rule a model can be held to. The same discipline, on the governance side of this site.

Source

ASD-STE100 Issue 9, Section 9 - Writing practices, page 1-9-1.

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