error · Section 3: Verbs

Rule 3.5: Use the "-ing" form of a verb only as a technical noun or noun modifier

Do not use a word with an '-ing' form as part of a verb phrase (a progressive tense) or to build long modifying clauses attached to a noun. The '-ing' form may be used in two separate, independent ways: (1) as a valid technical noun (for example in a procedure title or heading) or as a functional modifier within a technical noun describing the function of a system, component, part, tool, or material — this path does not require the specific '-ing' word to also appear in the small dictionary-approved general list; or (2) as one of the small number of dictionary-approved general '-ing' words. A word only needs to satisfy one of these two paths, not both.

What a checker looks for

A clear deviation from the rule.

  • Flag any '-ing' word used as part of a verb phrase (progressive tense, e.g. 'is opening,' 'are doing') rather than as a technical noun or noun-modifier.
  • Flag '-ing' words used to build long modifying phrases or dependent clauses attached to a noun (e.g. 'a mechanic opening a door without observing the safety precautions...').
  • For an '-ing' word used as a noun or noun-modifier, confirm it is EITHER a valid technical noun/functional modifier within an approved technical noun (e.g. 'air-conditioning system,' 'grinding wheel,' 'welding torch') OR one of the small dictionary-approved general set (e.g. lighting, opening, routing, servicing as nouns; mating, missing, remaining as adjectives; something as a pronoun; during as a preposition) — it does not need to satisfy both.

What this rule does not cover

  • '-ing' words used as procedure/section titles or headings (e.g. 'Cleaning,' 'Testing and Fault Isolation,' 'Troubleshooting') are compliant technical-noun uses, not violations.
  • An '-ing' word functioning as a modifier describing a component's function within a multi-word noun (e.g. 'switching relay') is compliant.

How to fix it

Rewrite the sentence so the action is expressed with a finite verb in an approved tense (rule 3.2) — typically converting 'while X is -ing' to 'while X verb-s,' and breaking long '-ing'-headed modifier clauses into separate short sentences or a numbered list.

Constraints on the fix

  • Keep '-ing' words that are approved technical nouns or noun-modifiers (headings, component names) unchanged.

Examples

Not STE: When you are doing this procedure, obey all the safety precautions.

STE: When you do this procedure, obey all the safety precautions.

The progressive 'are doing' becomes the simple present 'do.'

Not STE: A mechanic opening a door without following the safety precautions can cause injury.

STE: If a mechanic opens a door and does not obey the safety precautions, injury can occur.

The '-ing' clause modifier ('opening', 'following') is rewritten as a full clause with finite verbs ('opens', 'does not obey') instead of a long noun-phrase modifier.

Related rules

Where this fits in AI governance

A rule a checker can test is a rule a model can be held to. The same discipline, on the governance side of this site.

Source

ASD-STE100 Issue 9, Section 3 - Verbs, page 1-3-4.

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